Pretty good, some unfortunate loss of time in a few places, I believe the end can have two less dialogue and the Shachi could be decently faster if I just instant Heavenly Destruction, also I didnt realize I ran out of bar for Jask so that was a good amount of time loss as well. Some time loss could be made up on the second stage as well by not killing as many foes on the base. And the commanders could have played nicer in a few spots.